Hi everybody,
this is my first drawing and I would like to know your comments..
I post also the original photo used to make my drawing..
Thanks a lot,
Valentina
Full Version: comments on my first drawing
very very good
Hi Valentina, I think this is a good beginning. I hope to see more of your work in the future (looking forward to the progress!).
Very good 
That is so good that it cannot be your first! Great Job!
Valentina,
Very nice reference of a beautiful kitty...watch your angles...in the reference the cats head is at about a 45 degree angle...in your drawing you have straightened his head a wee bit. That is something we all tend to do if we are not careful to pay attention to the angles in our references. It would appear that you have made your kitty a wee bit thinner as well...push the darks....Don't get me wrong this is a great drawing just trying to find things that will help you for the next time. Nice job on the wood grain!
Can't wait to see what you do next!
Laura
Very nice reference of a beautiful kitty...watch your angles...in the reference the cats head is at about a 45 degree angle...in your drawing you have straightened his head a wee bit. That is something we all tend to do if we are not careful to pay attention to the angles in our references. It would appear that you have made your kitty a wee bit thinner as well...push the darks....Don't get me wrong this is a great drawing just trying to find things that will help you for the next time. Nice job on the wood grain!
Can't wait to see what you do next!
Laura
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