i draw this by following one of this site Drawing Lessons
i strongly need your comments to improve my skills

thanks

Mugbel,
The picture looks a bit out of focus, but from what I can see it looks great!

i think your doing great , but you definatly need a new camra, very grany,hard to review
try your flash in the dark

also there is something going on around the lips either lighten up the background in front of the lips or go really dark in the back ground , going dark usually makes the face pop out..len

Mindy
Thanks, acutlly i used my Mobile for capturing this drawing

len
Thanks for you comments, but, is it good to make the face pop out, by making the back ground darker.