this is the first time i show my drawings, but i think i need feedback to become better^^ this is just two out of many pictures, but if someone could just look at these pics and say what you think, or what i could have done better, or anything, i'd be really grateful

And i'm sorry about the bad photographing

I think you're doing great, you have some nice shading going.

The face has some problems with dimensions, Brenda has some great lessons for faces, check out this one and there are several others as well.

You will also want to start trusting that your shading is going to give you form. So you will want to be bolder with your darks and start to take out the outline lines on the drawings. Also don't be afraid to put in some background to help get your form.

The adult hand really shows how great you are doing with your shading. I look forward to seeing more!

I agree with paulette ...dont be afraid of the dark lol ...I use to think the darker the harder to fix ..but found quickly that the darker I went in the right areas brought my drawing to life .

also remember the highlights ..like that sparkle in the eye is the brightest part .